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| Ad | CL16 · static 4:5 two-column |
| ad_id | uki-ad-20261012-006 (16-pilot/mint-CL16.json) |
| Objective | Conversion: WhatsApp booking of the RM198 first trial, judged on cost per booked trial from the chat log + the per-ad code, never on cost per chat alone (map-v4 objective). |
| Offer line | 首次细胞光体验 RM198 |
| Type · pain | comparison · pain A: breakouts that keep coming back after bottle after bottle of skincare |
| ICP | Women about 25-40 within ~8 km of The Park, Bukit Jalil whose breakouts keep coming back after switching skincare (07-icp-pain-usp/ICP-MAP.md §0 point 1: Jev picked this segment 0.49 vs next 0.19; the product-switching loop is its strongest angle, 0.77). |
| Hook (map-v4) | 「痘痘反反复复，下一瓶会不一样吗？」 |
| Structure from | map-v4 CL16 (drs-001 two columns + a question about the old fix; 509-025 shows bare labels did not book). As made, the right label reads 「细胞光 3.0」 (map-v4 had 「首次细胞光体验」). |
| Chain so far | brief atom-brief-ukiyo-newbatch-cl16 · visual evidence atom-visual-evidence-ukiyo-newbatch-cl16 · canvas atom-canvas-atom-ukiyo-macbook-air-2-01187 (16-pilot/onchain/canvas2-CL16.out) |
| File | ~/.zennith/state/ukiyo-winning-ads-2026-10-10/16-pilot/finals2/CL16-final.png |
A 4:5 static in the dark-lounge look. Headline at the top; two framed pictures under it: left 「再换一瓶」, half-used skincare bottles on a stone ledge; right 「细胞光 3.0」, the cream CellLight paddle with a broad red glow on a calm cheek, two gloved hands from behind her head. Two lines under each picture, the offer line at the foot, the real UKIYO logo bottom-centre.
Copy on the image (exact):
Audit: G7 god-audit 8.9/10 'GOOD' (16-pilot/audit/g7f2-CL16.log, ladder atom-ladder-verdict-atom-ukiyo-macbook-air-2-00060), below the 9.5 bar.
| Ref | Source (file · record) | Signal | We copy | Never copy |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Dr Stan drs-001 two-column | 02-drstan-winners/WINNERS.md §'drs-001'; evidence/static-drs-001.jpg | 10 bookings | Worry headline + two columns (old fix vs the visit). | 永久修复; 零副作用; 90%成功率; the pill illustration |
| Dr Stan 509-025 (what not to do) | 06-winning-dna/evidence/drs-loser-509-025.jpg | 0 bookings | Nothing; it shows that bare column labels without a question did not book. | bare labels with no headline question |
| akind 'old me / new me' | 14-comparison-reworks/refs/COMPARISON-REFS.md §2 (drstan 7fc5a6b3aee1) | pin, no run data | The quiet two-object look. | its toner product |
| Paid video seconds | 0 s of Wan 3.0 i2v |
| Est. USD (one fire per shot) | $0.00 at 1080p ($0.00 at 720p); $0.00 if every shot needs one retry |
| Voice take | none |
| Keyframes / statics | codex-image-gen or local composite, $0 (subscription / local) |
legal_scan.py --selftest PASS, then legal_scan.py 24-wave1-prd/wave1-lines.json: CL16 pass (hook + 8 on-screen + 0 voice lines). Hits: none. Review flags: none.
Extra code check for the scanner's known blind spots (17-dpl/COMPLIANCE.md §3) and this run's rules (放松 / 舒缓 / 健康 / Korean claims / eye shields): none found.
Rules held (where they apply to this ad): real pain first; results only as how skin looks + 效果因人而异; offer line only (no visit details); no relax / lie-back / feel lines; no eye-shield mention; no 'you have X'; generated people never pose as customers; before/after only from the real UKIYO client; device = the cream paddle with the red light-bar, never the purple-logo head; machine keeps its own 'Cell Light III Platinum' print; aesthetician at the head of the bed.
Every Wan clip and every final lands on chain at action time: S3 copy, then a G5 video/canvas atom parented to this ad's visual-evidence atom, then the /approvals row (CLAUDE.md forward-emission rule).